The diving tale by Spandana Singh

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1 Response to The diving tale by Spandana Singh

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Spandana,

    You did a good job of altering the text to make it your own and included some interesting elements. You’ve made some basic grammatical errors. What’s the difference between was and were?

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