With all of the fun things your protagonist (the main character) was excited about it was definitely an interesting plot twist that water was what they wanted the most. Water is very important but in your story I think maybe there is some added significance that we the readers don’t know about yet…. maybe your character is a mermaid… or the planet is a giant desert? So many possibilities when you write a story.
This was an interesting take on the challenge this week, you made great use of the writer’s voice to draw me into your writing. Think about how you can use punctuation and other devices to create effects.
With all of the fun things your protagonist (the main character) was excited about it was definitely an interesting plot twist that water was what they wanted the most. Water is very important but in your story I think maybe there is some added significance that we the readers don’t know about yet…. maybe your character is a mermaid… or the planet is a giant desert? So many possibilities when you write a story.
Hi Hidit,
This was an interesting take on the challenge this week, you made great use of the writer’s voice to draw me into your writing. Think about how you can use punctuation and other devices to create effects.
Mrs M