Brilliant Jayanna, you make great use of descriptive language and varied sentence lengths to draw me into your festive tale. Lets work at making sure you finish as well as you start.
I loved the part when you wrote the glistening snow of Antarctica well done by amina
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Brilliant Jayanna, you make great use of descriptive language and varied sentence lengths to draw me into your festive tale. Lets work at making sure you finish as well as you start.
I loved the part when you wrote the glistening snow of Antarctica well done
by amina