Anjali I like your amazing story, although you need to check your grammar as the sentence Later in the night you didn’t do a capital L for the start of the sentence. Also you did a big finger space when starting the speech of “Oh my gosh!” I have also noticed you also repeated that with night and also the. Other then that I think it is really good!
From Sara
Anjal I like your fantastic story although, you did not put capital letter on one of the sentence.
You created allot of powerful adjectives and the story really grabbed my attention.
The story was very gripping and caught hold my mind. I think that this story was spectacular!
Well Done!
Keep it up!
Ratheena 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
Anjali I like your amazing story, although you need to check your grammar as the sentence Later in the night you didn’t do a capital L for the start of the sentence. Also you did a big finger space when starting the speech of “Oh my gosh!” I have also noticed you also repeated that with night and also the. Other then that I think it is really good!
From Sara
Anjal I like your fantastic story although, you did not put capital letter on one of the sentence.
You created allot of powerful adjectives and the story really grabbed my attention.
The story was very gripping and caught hold my mind. I think that this story was spectacular!
Well Done!
Keep it up!
Ratheena 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂