What a lovely reminder of how a few kind words can help us to overcome our fears Arafah, a lovely message to your story. Next time remember to use a capital letter after speech marks.
Miss A
you have included all the words but your story is not very exited maybe next time try to use less dialogue and more descriptive writing but well done
from amina
What a lovely reminder of how a few kind words can help us to overcome our fears Arafah, a lovely message to your story. Next time remember to use a capital letter after speech marks.
Miss A
AMAZING BUILD UP! Next time work on capital letters
Hi Arafah
I loved your start to the story it was nice and detailed
From Somran
you have included all the words but your story is not very exited maybe next time try to use less dialogue and more descriptive writing but well done
from amina
Hi Arafah , I really like your story. Keep it up!