Hi Prithikaa. You write very confidently and I enjoyed this hint of Christmas catastrophe and its mysterious cliffhanger ending. Beginning your story with a subordinate clause is an effective strategy and your use of “so-o-o-o-o” is well placed. Nice work!
Prithikaa you make some lovely use of descriptive language again this week but you need to make sure you give your reader enough information so they are not left confused.
Hi Prithikaa. You write very confidently and I enjoyed this hint of Christmas catastrophe and its mysterious cliffhanger ending. Beginning your story with a subordinate clause is an effective strategy and your use of “so-o-o-o-o” is well placed. Nice work!
Prithikaa you make some lovely use of descriptive language again this week but you need to make sure you give your reader enough information so they are not left confused.
Hello
Wow! great use of language.
Check your tense
From Somran
check spellings but fine
Hi Prithikaa, I’m so proud of you! You have won the 100 word challenge. I really am impressed.
hi prithikaa,
your title is amazing it makes the reader want to read more great work well done.
by: Amina
Thank you everyone.
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