You have created a very scary piece of writing Gharish. I like how you describe ‘a trio of hands grabbed them’. This gives the reader a clear picture in their mind of what is happening. Leaving the reader in suspense at the end is also a super and dramatic way to finish a piece of writing.
You have created a very scary piece of writing Gharish. I like how you describe ‘a trio of hands grabbed them’. This gives the reader a clear picture in their mind of what is happening. Leaving the reader in suspense at the end is also a super and dramatic way to finish a piece of writing.