hamzah 1234567

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2 Responses to hamzah 1234567

  1. gandz says:

    Nice Description Hamzi, your story is both emotional and scary.:P

  2. Mr G, Sheffield, UK (Team 100WC) says:

    Goodness me Hamzah, what a terrifying adventure your characters had. I’d love to know more about them – were they sailors or pirates … or perhaps explorers? What were the sea creatures like that caused such destruction? I like the simile of trees being like skyscrapers; I guess tall ones really are like that and provide homes for creatures just like skyscapers often provide homes for humans.
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.

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