I really enjoyed your story and loved the idea of your Dad teaching your Mum to bake – perhaps he could teach you too? The ending of your story made me laugh out loud.
Try to remember to check over your work before you publish it to ensure that the sentences make sense and the punctuation is in the correct place, for example, should there have been a full stop after the word ‘won’ and before ‘Amazing’?
I look forward to reading some more of your work soon so do keep writing.
I loved your story it rocked and it was awesome keep the good work arafah welldone
from amina
Hi Arafah,
I really enjoyed your story and loved the idea of your Dad teaching your Mum to bake – perhaps he could teach you too? The ending of your story made me laugh out loud.
Try to remember to check over your work before you publish it to ensure that the sentences make sense and the punctuation is in the correct place, for example, should there have been a full stop after the word ‘won’ and before ‘Amazing’?
I look forward to reading some more of your work soon so do keep writing.
Mrs Godding
Team 100WC