Well done Liyana,
A great piece of writing with really good punctuation and speech. To improve, you could try to use some adjectives or adverbs to describe your writing in more detail. Kee up the great writing!
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Well done Liyana,
A great piece of writing with really good punctuation and speech. To improve, you could try to use some adjectives or adverbs to describe your writing in more detail.
Kee up the great writing!