I really liked how you used the prompt in your 100WC as you painted a really good picture in my mind of all the fans and the flags waving int he stadium. You used some good vocabulary, like “terrific” and “finally”. Next time you use names, make sure you always use a capital for each word in the name (like Manchester United) and then check your work to make sure no other extra capitals are in there by mistake!
Hi Ithmam,
I really liked how you used the prompt in your 100WC as you painted a really good picture in my mind of all the fans and the flags waving int he stadium. You used some good vocabulary, like “terrific” and “finally”. Next time you use names, make sure you always use a capital for each word in the name (like Manchester United) and then check your work to make sure no other extra capitals are in there by mistake!
Well done.