Hi Amaan and thanks for entering the 100WC this week! Your writing is action-packed and fast moving and I enjoyed reading it. I can see you’re practising your use of semi-colons! One good tip to remember is to read through your writing when you’ve finished, and read it out loud to yourself. That way, it makes it easier to spot which kind of punctuation you need. Well done and keep up the good work!
Mrs D, Team 100, Cambridgeshire, UK
Hi Amaan and thanks for entering the 100WC this week! Your writing is action-packed and fast moving and I enjoyed reading it. I can see you’re practising your use of semi-colons! One good tip to remember is to read through your writing when you’ve finished, and read it out loud to yourself. That way, it makes it easier to spot which kind of punctuation you need. Well done and keep up the good work!
Mrs D, Team 100, Cambridgeshire, UK