Wow! A great story; myself and my class 4CM thought that the references to the game were interesting to read. We particularly liked the dramatic use of words and reference to poison. What gave you the idea to write it? Why is it called ‘The Crying Baby’ if the baby doesn’t cry? Perhaps you could think of a different word than slowly, such as steadily?
Thanks for the great read,
from 4CM
Wow! A great story; myself and my class 4CM thought that the references to the game were interesting to read. We particularly liked the dramatic use of words and reference to poison. What gave you the idea to write it? Why is it called ‘The Crying Baby’ if the baby doesn’t cry? Perhaps you could think of a different word than slowly, such as steadily?
Thanks for the great read,
from 4CM