This sounds like a fun afternoon – you add lots of descriptions to let your reader know what is happening. It would be even better if you could work on the ending – I think ‘Super awesome’ could maybe changed? Well tried Jane Team 100 WC Barnsley UK
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This sounds like a fun afternoon – you add lots of descriptions to let your reader know what is happening. It would be even better if you could work on the ending – I think ‘Super awesome’ could maybe changed? Well tried Jane Team 100 WC Barnsley UK