Hi Sara, thankyou for posting your writing for this week’s 100WC, I enjoyed reading it. I can see that you’ve thought really hard about using a range of different words for effect and well done for using so many different synonyms for ‘said’ as it really helps to make it interesting for the reader.
An interesting response to the prompt.
Excellent vocabulary and good use of conversation. You evoke the scene very well and the reader immediately dislikes the objectionable mother by the tone of her voice.
Well done. Keep up the good writing.
Very brilliant story, I have nothing bad to say about it.
It really sucked me in, I wish you had a chance to finish the whole story, I really want to know what’s going to happen next.
Hi Sara, thankyou for posting your writing for this week’s 100WC, I enjoyed reading it. I can see that you’ve thought really hard about using a range of different words for effect and well done for using so many different synonyms for ‘said’ as it really helps to make it interesting for the reader.
Thank you 🙂
An interesting response to the prompt.
Excellent vocabulary and good use of conversation. You evoke the scene very well and the reader immediately dislikes the objectionable mother by the tone of her voice.
Well done. Keep up the good writing.
Thank you for the reply.
Very brilliant story, I have nothing bad to say about it.
It really sucked me in, I wish you had a chance to finish the whole story, I really want to know what’s going to happen next.
By Ratheena
Thanks Ratheena.