Hi Sadia. A very good poem and a very good response to the prompt. Your repetition of the line “I feel like” works very well, especially as it echoes the title which is then repeated in the final line and mirrored with the question for the reader. Your poem is full of interesting ideas and descriptions too. I hope you enjoyed writing this poem and will experiment with different strategies too as I think you have a talent for expressing ideas well in poetic form. Well done!!
Hi Sadia. A very good poem and a very good response to the prompt. Your repetition of the line “I feel like” works very well, especially as it echoes the title which is then repeated in the final line and mirrored with the question for the reader. Your poem is full of interesting ideas and descriptions too. I hope you enjoyed writing this poem and will experiment with different strategies too as I think you have a talent for expressing ideas well in poetic form. Well done!!
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