Hello Kumar, well done for such an exciting piece of writing. You have chosen some powerful words like ‘violent, harsh, chills of fear’ and they all add to the sense of urgency that you are trying to create.
I hope you continue this story as I wonder where you may end up after falling into that black hole.
Hello Kumar, well done for such an exciting piece of writing. You have chosen some powerful words like ‘violent, harsh, chills of fear’ and they all add to the sense of urgency that you are trying to create.
I hope you continue this story as I wonder where you may end up after falling into that black hole.
Mrs Duxbury
Thank you very much!