Hello Shuhuna
What a fabulous effort you’ve made here – such an imaginative story. The ending is not too happy though, and I wonder what the protagonist had done to deserve standing in the grey fog, alone, forever!
You’ve conjured up a surreal scene here what with the misty place, the unusual descriptive phrases and the psychological tension. It’s all very intense.
Very well done, and keep up this terrific work (but read it through carefully to check the spelling and punctuation)!
Sarah Team 100WC
Montpellier, France
Hello Shuhuna
What a fabulous effort you’ve made here – such an imaginative story. The ending is not too happy though, and I wonder what the protagonist had done to deserve standing in the grey fog, alone, forever!
You’ve conjured up a surreal scene here what with the misty place, the unusual descriptive phrases and the psychological tension. It’s all very intense.
Very well done, and keep up this terrific work (but read it through carefully to check the spelling and punctuation)!
Sarah Team 100WC
Montpellier, France