Well done on your entry this week Irina. I really liked your story it was a creative and imaginative use of the prompt. You have created some interesting elements in your story eg Shorrokins of Ice, which makes yours story interesting. Make sure to read over your work and check for spellings mistakes. Don’t forget that titles and names get capital letters.
Hi, Irina!
What a fabulous story! I like how you used dialogue to bring the characters to life for your readers. I also enjoyed the surprise of the stone army soldiers that popped out and kicked you.
For spelling, I like the app called Ginger. It highlights misspellings and makes suggestions when you are writing online. My students find it useful. http://www.gingersoftware.com/
Keep up the great writing!
Ms. Rainey
California, USA
Well done on your entry this week Irina. I really liked your story it was a creative and imaginative use of the prompt. You have created some interesting elements in your story eg Shorrokins of Ice, which makes yours story interesting. Make sure to read over your work and check for spellings mistakes. Don’t forget that titles and names get capital letters.
Hi, Irina!
What a fabulous story! I like how you used dialogue to bring the characters to life for your readers. I also enjoyed the surprise of the stone army soldiers that popped out and kicked you.
For spelling, I like the app called Ginger. It highlights misspellings and makes suggestions when you are writing online. My students find it useful.
http://www.gingersoftware.com/
Keep up the great writing!
Ms. Rainey
California, USA