What a scary story! You have used some very interesting words which encourage the reader to read on. Next time, try to include more connectives to produce some longer sentences.
Brilliant Somran! I was really creeped out reading this; imagine a scary dolly coming to life, that’s stuff of nightmares! Remember to put words that are said inside speech marks.
Miss A
What a scary story! You have used some very interesting words which encourage the reader to read on. Next time, try to include more connectives to produce some longer sentences.
Brilliant Somran! I was really creeped out reading this; imagine a scary dolly coming to life, that’s stuff of nightmares! Remember to put words that are said inside speech marks.
Miss A
Well done somran, You make me very proud of your writing.
Continue writing more stories and use you teachers recomendacion
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