Wow! What fantastic description Esha; you really created a tense atmosphere for your reader through your careful word choices and leave wanting to know more. Well done. Next time try to extend your sentences using connectives.
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Wow! What fantastic description Esha; you really created a tense atmosphere for your reader through your careful word choices and leave wanting to know more. Well done. Next time try to extend your sentences using connectives.