It was so wonderful to read such an imaginative piece of writing – well done. I think it may have been hard to guess the banana shape. I wonder what kind of other things your teacher has bought in. I may try this with my class as it may help build up their describing skills, is that what happens with you?
Perhaps next time you could use some of those describing words in your writing too.
Surabhi a very original way to respond to this week’s prompt. I really liked the way you used a question to pull me into your writing. You need to work at using synonyms to avoid repetition.
Hello Surabhi,
It was so wonderful to read such an imaginative piece of writing – well done. I think it may have been hard to guess the banana shape. I wonder what kind of other things your teacher has bought in. I may try this with my class as it may help build up their describing skills, is that what happens with you?
Perhaps next time you could use some of those describing words in your writing too.
Mrs Duxbury
Surabhi a very original way to respond to this week’s prompt. I really liked the way you used a question to pull me into your writing. You need to work at using synonyms to avoid repetition.