Hi hamza. I am khaola your sister. I really like your story. Well done for writing such an interesting story 🙂
Well done Hamza, you’ve organised your work into clear paragraphs and included lots of different story devices; I enjoyed reading this. Next time try to add more description to help me picture events in my mind. Miss A
thank you miss a
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Hi hamza. I am khaola your sister. I really like your story.
Well done for writing such an interesting story 🙂
Well done Hamza, you’ve organised your work into clear paragraphs and included lots of different story devices; I enjoyed reading this.
Next time try to add more description to help me picture events in my mind.
Miss A
thank you miss a