Good Rohan, plenty of exciting action made more tense by your precise descriptive detail. Next time remember to add commas when you pause. I can see a talented writer here! Miss A
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Good Rohan, plenty of exciting action made more tense by your precise descriptive detail. Next time remember to add commas when you pause.
I can see a talented writer here!
Miss A