comment p2
I really like the way you put down
.All Alone. because it creates tension and is short snappy sentence!!!!
Also you used some great vocabulary!!!!
Keep up the exceptional work!!:) ; ) : ) : ) ; ) : ) ; )
From: Imaan. Janjua!
Great stuff Jayanna, I really loved this; your fabulous use of descriptive language and use of questions really had me hooked. Remember to punctuate all of your questions with a question mark.
Miss A
WOW Jayanna,
I adore how you wrote
The Ghostly Galleon Sea!!!!!!! And how you wrote something had brushed my back and not
just something on my back!
comment p2
I really like the way you put down
.All Alone. because it creates tension and is short snappy sentence!!!!
Also you used some great vocabulary!!!!
Keep up the exceptional work!!:) ; ) : ) : ) ; ) : ) ; )
From: Imaan. Janjua!
Great stuff Jayanna, I really loved this; your fabulous use of descriptive language and use of questions really had me hooked. Remember to punctuate all of your questions with a question mark.
Miss A