cool story zaeem, I like how you described the picture in our heads. 🙂 😛 by your best friends Karolina and Janna.
Brilliant Zaeem! I love the way you used precise detail to paint a picture in my mind and you used the narrator’s voice to draw me in further. Try to use connectives to vary your sentence structures. Keep it up. Miss A
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cool story zaeem, I like how you described the picture in our heads.
🙂 😛
by your best friends Karolina and Janna.
Brilliant Zaeem! I love the way you used precise detail to paint a picture in my mind and you used the narrator’s voice to draw me in further. Try to use connectives to vary your sentence structures.
Keep it up.
Miss A