Romasa,
Thank you for sharing your story. I enjoyed reading it. You did a nice job of adding dialogue to your writing. It helps add excitement to the story. I wonder what it was that Jackson was feeling? What do you think it was? Keep writing with interesting word choice and dialogue.
Romasa,
Thank you for sharing your story. I enjoyed reading it. You did a nice job of adding dialogue to your writing. It helps add excitement to the story. I wonder what it was that Jackson was feeling? What do you think it was? Keep writing with interesting word choice and dialogue.
Mrs. W