romasa 100 word challenge

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1. Mrs. W (Team 100WC) says:

   January 31, 2015 at 7:52 pm

   Romasa,
   Thank you for sharing your story. I enjoyed reading it. You did a nice job of adding dialogue to your writing. It helps add excitement to the story. I wonder what it was that Jackson was feeling? What do you think it was? Keep writing with interesting word choice and dialogue.

   Mrs. W

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