The hand on the window by Aadeeb

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5 Responses to The hand on the window by Aadeeb

  1. Mr G, Sheffield, UK (Team 100WC) says:

    Whoa! I shudder to think what on earth your character could feel Aadeeb. What a spooky story indeed. I’m not sure I’d ever want to buy a house like the one you described here (Not brave enough!). I wonder what the ‘last owner of the house’ looked like … ?
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.

  2. Gharish says:

    I like the description that you have used

  3. uddii says:

    Aadeeb you have a great piece of writing with great adjective’s. Keep up the good writing. From Ithmam.

  4. vands says:

    Great Story Aadeeb there was tension right at the start/

  5. vands says:

    woops not / I mean . Well Done 😀

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