I like the way you tried to add a scary effect, next time try to use some connectives and some description. ZG
good story but next time include the prompt a bit more
Janna this is a fab story but you haven’t included the prompt! Miss A
Thank you guys for sending messages:) And I will work on the prompt a little bit more!
Great story janna, keep up the good work. You’ve created a picture in my mind clearly!:-) Next time in your fabulous stories use adjectives and remember to use semicolons to put two things you want together!
thank you cousin. I really appreciate your message and I will work on the things you said . P.S please go on my blog again
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I like the way you tried to add a scary effect, next time try to use some connectives and some description. ZG
good story but next time include the prompt a bit more
Janna this is a fab story but you haven’t included the prompt!
Miss A
Thank you guys for sending messages:)
And I will work on the prompt a little bit more!
Great story janna, keep up the good work.
You’ve created a picture in my mind clearly!:-)
Next time in your fabulous stories use adjectives and remember to use semicolons to put two things you want together!
thank you cousin. I really appreciate your message and I will work on the things you said .
P.S please go on my blog again