I really appreciate you using the genre of poetry to respond to the picture prompt. This gives you the opportunity to make the most of your wonderful descriptive language. I appreciate your similes like “lightning was flashing as bright as the mighty sun” and “thunder was as loud as a erupting volcano”. I also appreciate descriptive details such as the pitch black sky and ‘the supreme wind howling.” You show how terrifying the footsteps were by your use of “Stomp! Stomp! Stomp!”
When writing a poem, remember to keep the lines consistent. After “There was a little girl”, you might want to skip to the next line, “Her name was Lucy”. When mum comes into the work, you could consider formatting the rest of the writing in a poetry format.
I look forward to reading your future writing,
Irene
Hello Latif,
I really appreciate you using the genre of poetry to respond to the picture prompt. This gives you the opportunity to make the most of your wonderful descriptive language. I appreciate your similes like “lightning was flashing as bright as the mighty sun” and “thunder was as loud as a erupting volcano”. I also appreciate descriptive details such as the pitch black sky and ‘the supreme wind howling.” You show how terrifying the footsteps were by your use of “Stomp! Stomp! Stomp!”
When writing a poem, remember to keep the lines consistent. After “There was a little girl”, you might want to skip to the next line, “Her name was Lucy”. When mum comes into the work, you could consider formatting the rest of the writing in a poetry format.
I look forward to reading your future writing,
Irene