I like the transitional words used such as suddenly and since. You have a lot of detail in a short response. Nice job!
I was a little confused by some of your sentences, so make sure that next week you read through your writing a few times before publishing.
I like the transitional words used such as suddenly and since. You have a lot of detail in a short response. Nice job!
I was a little confused by some of your sentences, so make sure that next week you read through your writing a few times before publishing.