I love the word ‘oblivion’!. Don’t forget to use capital letters for all your sentences! Maybe you could have added an adjective to describe the burglar. Well done, keep up the blogging!
If you have time, please take a look at our year 4 story ideas blogs- Paris and Madrid. We are trying out ideas for story plans, and character descriptions.
Here is a link, check with your teacher first though! http://mead-primary-school.j2webby.com/?cat=9
When I write a story, I try to read it back to myself before publishing. That way I can find any mistakes and correct them. If you read this back, can you see anything you would like to change?
I wonder what a lotion sofa is? This was certainly a mysterious story. Well done for taking part in the 100 Word Challenge this week.
I love the word ‘oblivion’!. Don’t forget to use capital letters for all your sentences! Maybe you could have added an adjective to describe the burglar. Well done, keep up the blogging!
If you have time, please take a look at our year 4 story ideas blogs- Paris and Madrid. We are trying out ideas for story plans, and character descriptions.
Here is a link, check with your teacher first though!
http://mead-primary-school.j2webby.com/?cat=9
When I write a story, I try to read it back to myself before publishing. That way I can find any mistakes and correct them. If you read this back, can you see anything you would like to change?
I wonder what a lotion sofa is? This was certainly a mysterious story. Well done for taking part in the 100 Word Challenge this week.