Hi pavan,
I really liked your introduction of your story, I felt very sorry for Iggy but at the end he got an escape,
Next time make sure you cheek your work for some grammar mistakes, also your title dose not include wiggy and piggy.
From: Somran, 5B 🙂
HI Pavan
Your story was awesome and I really enjoyed it you really hooked me in straight from the start so a very well done pavan.
Layla 5b p.s please can you check out our class blog.:)
Hey Pavan,
wow! your opening was great and really drew me into your story. Like Somran said where is wiggy and piggy? why did Iggy run away to Newman and leave poor donkey on his own?
From Jayanna 🙂
interesting ideas but read through. There are some small errors. See if you can spot them. Commas and some words missing.
Ok, I will
hi Paven how are you I love your story
Thank you
Well done, it is a out standing effort you made with your work. Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!
good story but more information about Iggy and the farmer George
Hi pavan,
I really liked your introduction of your story, I felt very sorry for Iggy but at the end he got an escape,
Next time make sure you cheek your work for some grammar mistakes, also your title dose not include wiggy and piggy.
From: Somran, 5B 🙂
HI Pavan
Your story was awesome and I really enjoyed it you really hooked me in straight from the start so a very well done pavan.
Layla 5b p.s please can you check out our class blog.:)
Hey Pavan,
wow! your opening was great and really drew me into your story. Like Somran said where is wiggy and piggy? why did Iggy run away to Newman and leave poor donkey on his own?
From Jayanna 🙂
Sorry, I did not get to finish it
HI Pavan
🙂
pavan your story was very good lol 🙂