The story of Laser Lad and BlueMegaMan

Posted on March 3, 2015 by Deleted User
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15 Responses to The story of Laser Lad and BlueMegaMan

  1. adickson says:
    March 13, 2015 at 11:16 am

    Interesting names! Read through – there are some small errors. See if you can spot them.

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  2. mushk says:
    March 13, 2015 at 11:18 am

    Ok miss thanks for the heads up

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  4. pates says:
    March 13, 2015 at 2:39 pm

    and wicked

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  5. khile says:
    March 13, 2015 at 2:52 pm

    I am very impress with your amazing talented story about Bluemegaman and laser lad

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  6. vbarker says:
    March 15, 2015 at 8:48 am

    Really enjoyed reading your story!
    Mrs Barker

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  7. tasik says:
    March 20, 2015 at 2:20 pm

    Hi, I like the superheroes that you added into this story but you need to check some punctuation and you have some errors . -Karolina 5B

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  8. gandz says:
    March 20, 2015 at 2:21 pm

    I like your superheroes especially Mega man because he is from a game, try to vary your sentence structure. 🙂

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  9. habej says:
    March 20, 2015 at 2:30 pm

    cool story , loads of superheroes always win the day and next time when you write a story about them describe more things about them=)

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  10. kriss says:
    March 20, 2015 at 2:31 pm

    I like your imagination in this story.
    Work on your grammar and make sure you don’t include capital letters in the middle of sentences

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  11. bhuiz says:
    March 25, 2015 at 1:50 pm

    I like your story

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  12. eremi says:
    March 25, 2015 at 1:57 pm

    its very intresting I whant to learn more !!!

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  13. mulkr says:
    April 2, 2015 at 12:49 pm

    WOW! amazing story but tasik is right

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