An amazing poem Malaika! I like how you have changed your sentence structures to better ones. I have noticed you have a few grammar mistakes such as, Me ; the semi colon should be like this. Me;. For next time you could improve on your punctuation, however its really good. Oh and maybe some more interesting words. And I also like the onomatopheia.
From Sara
An amazing poem Malaika! I like how you have changed your sentence structures to better ones. I have noticed you have a few grammar mistakes such as, Me ; the semi colon should be like this. Me;. For next time you could improve on your punctuation, however its really good. Oh and maybe some more interesting words. And I also like the onomatopheia.
From Sara
good work Malaika, but you don’t have your prompt!!!!
~Imani~