You have some good ideas in your writing. I like that instead of using the word ‘said’ you thought about more interesting words. This helps make your writing more exciting. Make sure you always check through your work. Sometimes it is hard to notice missing punctuation and grammatical errors. Thank you for taking the time to do this weeks 100 word challenge.
Well Done Tea! I really like how you have used interesting speech. I have seen you have made some grammar mistakes, for this sentence as you kept two sentences together.
From Sara
I really like your work Tea, it really grabbed my attention, it made me sit on the edge of my chair. I wonder what happens when you get to New York with Imani..
You have some good ideas in your writing. I like that instead of using the word ‘said’ you thought about more interesting words. This helps make your writing more exciting. Make sure you always check through your work. Sometimes it is hard to notice missing punctuation and grammatical errors. Thank you for taking the time to do this weeks 100 word challenge.
Well Done Tea! I really like how you have used interesting speech. I have seen you have made some grammar mistakes, for this sentence as you kept two sentences together.
From Sara
FAB work tea just remember that you don’t need colour . Other than that it is amazing. ♥♥♥♥ Anjali
I really like your work Tea, it really grabbed my attention, it made me sit on the edge of my chair. I wonder what happens when you get to New York with Imani..
Ratheena