well done safwan. see you next year. from your friend hannah.
This is an interesting start. It would be great if you could re-draft the poem by saying what the elephant does on each day: On Monday the elephant ….. Then on Tuesday he …… But on Wednesday …..
this is a very excellent piece of work
well done you have started very well
I liked how it rhymed big wig grey may
Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *
Comment *
Name *
Email *
Save my name, email, and website in this browser for the next time I comment.
Δ
well done safwan. see you next year.
from your friend
hannah.
This is an interesting start. It would be great if you could re-draft the poem by saying what the elephant does on each day:
On Monday the elephant …..
Then on Tuesday he ……
But on Wednesday …..
this is a very excellent piece of work
well done you have started very well
I liked how it rhymed big wig grey may