That’s one crazy daydream you had there Karolina! I really loved all your precise vocabulary.
Next time watch you sentence lengths, some are too long.
Miss A
I love that you started with an onomatopoeia – that’s a great way to grab the reader’s attention. Please be careful using ‘a’ and ‘an.’ Remember, when a word starts with a vowel, the article ‘an’ should be used. I can imagine the sapphire water – how gorgeous! You seem to have a wonderful imagination – keep up the good work!
That’s one crazy daydream you had there Karolina! I really loved all your precise vocabulary.
Next time watch you sentence lengths, some are too long.
Miss A
I love that you started with an onomatopoeia – that’s a great way to grab the reader’s attention. Please be careful using ‘a’ and ‘an.’ Remember, when a word starts with a vowel, the article ‘an’ should be used. I can imagine the sapphire water – how gorgeous! You seem to have a wonderful imagination – keep up the good work!