my friend is dead

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2 Responses to my friend is dead

  1. nanand says:

    OH Romasa, thank goodness for Sparky! I am so glad he managed to save the day, I’m only sorry he didn’t make it out alive. Some great use of the narrator to create empathy in your reader. Remember next time to include all the words in the prompt; I can’t see pipe.
    Miss A

  2. Mrs Borthwick (Team 100WC) says:

    A lovely, if not sad story Romasa. I wonder if you could check the spelling of some of your words and see if have you chosen the correct spelling?

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