Hamza – what an exciting story! you have set the scene well and added drama and suspense! Remember to read through your story once you have finished to correct any misspellings or missing letters, and to start new sentences when needed. You have a good imagination and I enjoyed the ‘rescue’! Well done. Val team 100wc
What a hero you are Hamza! I really like the way you sequenced the events in your story this week.
Hamza – what an exciting story! you have set the scene well and added drama and suspense! Remember to read through your story once you have finished to correct any misspellings or missing letters, and to start new sentences when needed. You have a good imagination and I enjoyed the ‘rescue’! Well done. Val team 100wc