Kueene train

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2 Responses to Kueene train

  1. jnobeebaccus says:

    Super imagery and use of nice adjectives Kueene! Pearly and snowy are great examples of describing the swans. What else could you write in your description? Focus on the hills and the bridge now. What can you say about them?

  2. sheia says:

    I really like your work Kueene and how you described the swans and splashing water. Very good, I like it 🙂

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