Wow! Super work Saffa! I really like the description of the water splashing! There is excellent imagery throughout, especially the part where the energy flows through your body! Now try to add and improve your last sentence with the same style of writing as the first paragraph.
Wow! Super work Saffa! I really like the description of the water splashing! There is excellent imagery throughout, especially the part where the energy flows through your body! Now try to add and improve your last sentence with the same style of writing as the first paragraph.
AMAZING RAILWAY POEM YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FROM AISHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!