Spectacular writing Annais! I like how you have used interesting words to create tension. Maybe you can change some words to make them even better. For example I was wealthy! I sneaked some glistening, shimmering gold into my empty pocket, as soon as that sensation pierced my heart excitement started.
From Sara 😉
Spectacular writing Annais! I like how you have used interesting words to create tension. Maybe you can change some words to make them even better. For example I was wealthy! I sneaked some glistening, shimmering gold into my empty pocket, as soon as that sensation pierced my heart excitement started.
From Sara 😉
Nice work . Well done