Look at the last sentence. What has been missed out? Good writing otherwise. Good use of connectives and some great vocabulary.
Okay miss I changed it
wow I realy loved your story it was amazing you used adjectives and many verbs welldone
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Look at the last sentence. What has been missed out? Good writing otherwise. Good use of connectives and some great vocabulary.
Okay miss I changed it
wow I realy loved your story it was amazing you used adjectives and many verbs welldone