amelie story

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2 Responses to amelie story

  1. adickson says:

    You have tried to use speech marks correctly. some good use of punctuation.

    Speech marks – Mrs Old shouted, “Kate. Spell cat!”

  2. Jayanna says:

    Well done Amelie, you have a great structure to your story. Be careful of speech marks. You also had great description

    from Jayanna class 5b 🙂

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