This is a really good adventure, I like that you are in MI6 so had lots of adventures. You need to check your work before you submit it, there are some spelling and punctuation errors (Isle of Wight for example) and maybe a few more interesting adjectives would enhance it even more. Keep up the writing!
This is a really good adventure, I like that you are in MI6 so had lots of adventures. You need to check your work before you submit it, there are some spelling and punctuation errors (Isle of Wight for example) and maybe a few more interesting adjectives would enhance it even more. Keep up the writing!