I thought this was a fantastic, atmospheric story. You have used brilliant language to express the tension as it builds. I found the end quite shocking, was this a dream perhaps? I hope so! I would describe the whole experience as a bit more than a mishap though! Very well done.
I thought this was a fantastic, atmospheric story. You have used brilliant language to express the tension as it builds. I found the end quite shocking, was this a dream perhaps? I hope so! I would describe the whole experience as a bit more than a mishap though! Very well done.