Very good Al ( Xand) make sure you look out for punctuation before publishing you 100 word story, I like how you used blue eyes white dragon ( the yugioh character) and making it into your own character by changing his name.Check you tenses at the beginning of your story. And also add commas of connective when you want to join sentences.=)
from your best freind Janna
Very good Al ( Xand) make sure you look out for punctuation before publishing you 100 word story, I like how you used blue eyes white dragon ( the yugioh character) and making it into your own character by changing his name.Check you tenses at the beginning of your story. And also add commas of connective when you want to join sentences.=)
from your best freind Janna