I could sense your fear in the story. I like how you write in short sentences as they give good pace to the story. Remember to check that you use a capital letter for ‘i’ when you are using it to talk about yourself e.g One night when I was home alone… Keep up the good writing.
I could sense your fear in the story. I like how you write in short sentences as they give good pace to the story. Remember to check that you use a capital letter for ‘i’ when you are using it to talk about yourself e.g One night when I was home alone… Keep up the good writing.
Thank you, miss Tomlinson
great work hamza