To Zainab
your story was amazing, I could feel your every emotion. Your great description and rule of three really let me have a vivid image in my head.
well done
from Jayanna 🙂
A great piece of writing Zainab, I wonder what type of sharks they were circling above you, where they Great whites, or Lemon sharks. Keep up the good work Zainab. Try to set the scene and create some atmosphere.
very good zainab , I think it might be too cold to dive ito an ocean . Well done !
omg! what an ultimate adventure.
To Zainab
your story was amazing, I could feel your every emotion. Your great description and rule of three really let me have a vivid image in my head.
well done
from Jayanna 🙂
great work Zainab!!!!!!
I really like your adjectives and cliff-hanger.
keep writing
Surabhi : p
A great piece of writing Zainab, I wonder what type of sharks they were circling above you, where they Great whites, or Lemon sharks. Keep up the good work Zainab. Try to set the scene and create some atmosphere.